Tag: Redemption From Sin

Epilogue Insight

Thus, I have added a second tally onto my completed stories list. It was my toughest journey to date, but it felt very rewarding to accomplish. This story turned out much longer than I originally wished, and even further than intended with the poll….

Chapter 14 Insight

All chapter titles are now added! Despite the occasional slow parts, I feel I captured the mood of the final battle quite well. I added the referential time stamps during the final scenes to give a reference this wasn’t just all at once and…

Chapter 13 Insight

I purposefully didn’t name all the servants present in the final battle. Another one of my pet peeves is seeing a large list of names stacked together. I listed the remaining servants because there were only so few remaining, but the fleet was another…

Chapter 12 Insight

Tiamat did get the grail; That was inferred by the lahmus that were absorbed. I tried to make Tiamat feel like a final level’s boss she was showcased to be. I’ll showcase more next chapter, but I wanted her to feel gigantic, imposing, and…

Chapter 11 Insight

The lahmu are supposed to be as powerful as sphinxes, but I decided to pull a slight nerf on them. Yes, they’re powerful, but as stated in canon, they’re still learning. As such, they have basic instincts still, but also unrefined combat skills. Throwing…

Chapter 10 Insight

One thing people would want to see besides Enkidu and Gilgamesh properly reuniting? The two fighting. Too bad it’s Kingu though. It did give me leeway for some interesting changes and adaptations though. One would be his lack of the Presence Detection A+ and…

Chapter 9 Insight

Segment VI was a difficult scene to write. The reason is, the canon decisions both don’t actually fit what Gudao would say. He’d have his own unique answer based off of those two combined. Going off that, I wrote the scene as he would…

Chapter 8 Insight

Writing this chapter was both fun and tricky. The same things needed to happen as the canon story, but it had to be woven properly. There were servants to consider, situations to mold, and problems to introduce in order to make it all mesh….

Chapter 7 Insight

Far more action in the chapters to come. This is one of the two last pure dialogue chapters, and the second one will be arriving soon as well. Compared to the other days, Gilgamesh had a pretty even day today. Though seeing Kingu made…

Chapter 6 Insight

And now a long battle sequence. Fortunately, this wasn’t as confusing as writing defending the town during TGL. There were three distinct locations so it was easy for people to get their bearings, though I gave just enough details to describe rough locations. Otherwise,…